Our hoilday

Last couple of days we been doing a writing about how we felt in the holiday and learning to put more powerful adjective. The easy part was putting more adjectives in my writing. The hard part was thinking of a time in the holidays when I felt happy.I can use heaps of adjective.

Our Holiday

1. Waiting

2. “RR”

3.Presents

“This is Newshub” “Click” As I gazed at the boring T.V . “Their is nothing on the T.V aaaaaaa!” I yelled with excitement not “Nanny when is mum coming home from Aussie I’m getting so bored” “On a scale out of one to ten how would I rate my boredness I think 100!” I was so bored then.

“Rrrr” As my awesome mum pulled up with our white sparky car. “She’s here finally here. It’s like nearly 12 am” As I open our old weird door. I dash to my mum as fast as a cheetah to her. “Mum do you have any presents for me” “Are you going to say hi” “After you give my presents. So where are they” “First came and help me with my cool pretty bag’s” “Yeah no thank you ask Phoebe” As I walked gracefully back inside. “That girl man never help” “I heard that. The reason why because I’m lazy” “Typical Tahurangi” My mum said “I heard that too” I replied.

My two annoying but cute sisterś was running around like crazy wild animals. “I got beatiful presents” “Yeah right “ I whispered. 10 minutes later we all got our cool presents I got a bracelet that say my name a roxy jacket and sandals plus chocolate “Yummy” As I eat the delicious brown shiny chocolate.