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Last couple of days I been working on my report writing about eels it was interesting finding facts about eel some I didn't know so that was cool. The easy part was finding interesting fact about eel of course. The hard part was trying to put the facts into my own words like with out copying or paste it and organising my paragraph in the correct place and putting a space after my punctuate. I can search facts really easy on sites. I need to work on putting a space after my punctuate. Here's my finish report hope you like this😃 

Eels know in New Zealand Tuna

GENERAL STATEMENT

The eel known in New Zealand tuna. The eel is an Anguilliformes and a carnivorous. They spend their whole life underwater. Hydro dams stops the eels (Tuna) Moving freely up rivers and stop them to get to they migrating place. If you were an eel how would you feel? Their Scientific name is Anguilliformes.

APPEARANCE

During their life they can grow up to two metres long. When the eels are small they are smooth then older eels. Eels change shape when they are ready to migrate. Longfin eels also have a largemouth and small sharp teeth. The longfin eels top teeth that are form pointy like a pointy arrow.

DIET

Moray eel eat fish like molluscs and other eels. Fin-eels eat insect, larvae, water snails and worms. Eels hunt by smell rather than sight. Long fin eels have a well developed sense of smell, isn’t that cool.

LIFE CYCLE

When they are ready to have babies they leave New Zealand and swim up to 5000 kilometre to the tropical pacific where it’s safe. The name of eel larvae are called leptocephalus. Before entering fresh water the leptocephalus change form into a familiar eel body. Longfin eels breed only just before the end of their life.

Closing STATEMENT

Eels known in New Zealand Tuna. During their life they can grow up to two metres long, Longfin eels have a well developed sense of smell and Longfin eels breed only once at the end of their life. Do you think eels are interesting?