For the past week I been doing explain writing and we had to publish one. The hard part was thinking of some reason for my writing. The easy part was elaborating on my writing. Here is one of my explain writing I hope you like it.
Great piece of writing Tahurangi. You have clearly outlined some of the effects that our rubbish causes. Great to see rhetorical questions to get the reader thinking too. Next time, try to add some more facts and even some topic or academic language to make your writing more powerful.
Great piece of writing Tahurangi. You have clearly outlined some of the effects that our rubbish causes. Great to see rhetorical questions to get the reader thinking too. Next time, try to add some more facts and even some topic or academic language to make your writing more powerful.
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